Monday, 1 December 2014

Part B Romeo and Juilet final post

     Love is still the same despite being centuries apart. 
  

    Love can make your life better but also can can affect your life. In Romeo and Juilet it is displaying how there both of their lives turn more special when they meet each other, but espically for Romeo because his heartbreak over Rosaline was affecting him and the people around him. Thier love was true and that's why couples now in this century try to attempt loving each other just like how Romeo and Juilets love each other in the play. For example in the play when Juilet says '' My love as deep ; the more I give to thee '' which is stating that Juilet's love for Romeo is really deep. But this love between them is also affecting them because Juilet is a Capulet and Romeo is a Montague and Capulets and Montague's have been in rivalry for many years. If they told there family members about thier love they would both be restricted to meet each other and one of them might even be banished. But even though Juilet and Romeo are not allowed to meet each other, Juilet still says that ''Tis but thy name is my enemy;thou art myself, though not a Montague, What's Montague? it is nor hand, nor foot, nor arm, nor face, nor any other part, belonging to a man O, be some other name. This is stating how Juilet is talking to herself about, how she thinks that Romeo should not be defined by his name like all of his body parts are not Montague, only his name is acossicated with the Montague's.This situation also relates to this generation because, if two people love each other and thier from two different religons or there families are in rivarily just like in Romeo and Juilet you would have to hide it from your family members, but if the family members would find out they would get really upset and will probably even  forbid them to meet each other. When you have a two-sided situation like this it is more easier to observe if you actuallly love the person because, when you know you shouldn't be meeting that person and you still and your also willing to do anything for that person you love that shows that you love them a lot. 

     Despite having advantages and disadvantages in love your love only grows stronger for the person you love, when you love somebody and also support them in there hard times it helps your love grow more stronger. In the play when Romeo and Juilet have to go through so much complications to meet each other it shows there love growing stronger every time they get a chance to meet each other. Couples that have followed or now follow Romeo and Juilets universal relationship probably know that thier relationship has grown stronger over the many complications they have faced. That is showing each couple that you can choose to make thier relationship more stronger or chose to not to support the other person in thier hard times and that only makes your relationship weaker. There are also many ways to express your true love, like how Juliet says to Romeo if you love me truly then marry me and if you don't and just, want to have fun with me then forget me. Juliet's thinking is still similar to this century because, any girl would want there boyfriend who actually loves her, not for her body parts but for her personality and that is the same thinking for girls in this century and from centuries before. 

     Many people think that Romeo and Juliet have really strong love relationship that is true for many reasons. In the play when they first meet each other they instantly fall in love and that could occur in some relationships but not many. It is hard to believe just knowing each other for a few days and then admitting that you could take your life for that same person. You don't understand that person enough when you first meet them and Romeo and Juliet were immature teenagers, but you could also say that only a few couples have true love from this century and can't be so serious for their love. Most couples at a young age just use the other person to fulfil their personal expectataions, but their are people out there in the world that actually care about you and your needs. 

     
Well love can make your life better in many ways but also make your life bad, there will also be people that you come across in life that will take advantage of you and there will also be people who actaully care about you. But it's your choice on who you want in your life and in what position you want to put them. Like in Romeo and Juliet they show how they love each other so much just after one meeting, but it also shows how they care so much about each other and how they killed themselves that is a sign of true love. Overall love is two-sided and you choose your side and love will always grow stronger and will be the same despite being centuries apart. 

5 comments:

  1. Your argument seems pretty clear, you have a grammar mistake in the beginning at the word "that;s" don't forget to replace it with a comma! Nice argument on how they go against their family and name for their love other then the main reason people think they loved each other for which is killing themselves for each other, they did way more then that.

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  2. I like it so far! Yes the grammar mistake in the beginning but other than that its good!

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  3. This is great so far, I like your arguments. Besides the grammar mistake, it's looking good! (:

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  4. This is such a good post!:) good job& I like the amount of detail you put into the essay:) & I agree with Jasmine, just edit the grammar mistakes but the rest is all good:)

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  5. Thanks for always writing so much and putting in such an effort Kirat. Things to work on: your intro is clear but only on sentence (needs to be at least two or three), your writing this time is full of redundancy and confusing at times, your conclusion doesn't reinforce your original thesis. This that you did well: you are looking for examples of lines that support your idea, you have connected with a modern/personal aspect of relationships in paragraph which your peers can relate to, and you continue to write lots. I think there are solid ideas in here you need to find a way to strip the extra lines out to make your argument more clear and concise. :)

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